The Equestria Games

It was the day the Equestria Games inspector was coming to visit Cloudsdale. Thunderp, Clash, and X waited nervously at the Cloudsdale entrance waiting for the inspector. Just as the inspector, Mrs. CottonLuck was gonna arrive, a huge thunderstorm, one that no pegasaus could control, arrived.

"What in the name of Celestia is that!?" T shouted. T were to partisipate in the Equestia games, and was out cheching the prep. When the thunderstorm arrived, he had run towards it in curiosity. Now, he was close to the three ponies, and were looking at the sky. "What in the world..."

Clouds started to turn into a tornado. Pegasaus were going crazy. "RUN!!" Thunderp shouted. But it was too late. Cloudsdale was destroyed. The ponies preperations have been destroyed. "What do we do??" Thunderp wondered. Just then, Mrs.CottonLuck arrived with a confused face.

(ummm I would say this is a bit of a god playing act and shouldn't be done.... you gave no one the chance to 'save' Cloudsdale... and well shortened the rp ..... its not fun when something drastic happens and you have no control or no chance to reply to it before its over O-o )

(I completely agree with Vixen. This is some serious god-modding. I know you are new here, so you dont know this: making something happen, that is generally unstoppable or creating an almighty character, hurts the game a lot more then it helps it. The rules aren´t up yet, so you had no way of knowing.)

(I´ll give you a day or two, to find another way to continue (That does not include the suden destruction of Cloudsdale). You can always edit your old posts. If you don´t change it, I will PM you about it. I am sure we can get this story back on track. As long as you are willing to change a few things. )